Tuesday, August 23, 2011

Three..

Haven't written anything good in a while so here's a go. Tell me what you think:

The first was an average height fourteen year old from Florida. Despite being in the sun most of the year, she had pale alabaster toned skin. Her hair was somewhere between red and brown and her eyes were a supreme shade of blue. She wasn't anything special; just a typical private school student who played tennis and rode horses on the weekends. Her name was Megin Sparks, but at some point in her life she'd earned the nickname Blaze.

Mackenzie had three siblings. Being the oldest of the bunch, she often found herself a caretaker to her rowdy brothers. Her family lived on a small, five acre farm in the middle of rural Kansas. She'd been raised a country girl, but secretly she hated it. When she turned eighteen she planned to move to L.A and make her way as a model. She still had three more years until that happened. She was extremely attractive with her rich, chocolate curls and bright green eyes. Not that beauty would get you anything in Kansas..

She was a dancer. At least, she used to be. Now she was a cheerleader. She'd had six boyfriends in the past two months and nearly all the guys in the school liked her. Not only that, but every girl who laid eyes on her wanted to be her. She was perfect with evenly tanned skin, straight blonde hair, and exquisite brown eyes. Daniella Monterey Miguel-Dani, to everyone who knew her- was a star. And she loved shining.

1 comment:

  1. WOW.
    My dear, that's fantastic. Incredibly well done and executed. I applaud you! KEEP IT UP

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